A Flipped Writing Classroom: Effects on EFL Learners’ Argumentative Essays
Fatemeh Soltanpour
1
*, Mohammadreza Valizadeh
2
1
English Department, Kar Higher Education Institute PO box 1571, Qazvin, Iran
2
English Department, Faculty of Foreign Languages, Gazi University, PO Box 06500, Ankara, Turkey
Corresponding Author:
Fatemeh Soltanpour, E-mail: [email protected]
ABSTRACT
According to the literature, ipped teaching is a relatively new pedagogical approach in which
the typical activities of classroom lectures followed by homework in common teaching practice
are reversed in order, and most often integrated or supplemented with some types of instructional
materials, such as instructional videos or PowerPoint les. This experimental study, using a
pre-test-treatment-posttest-delayed posttest design, was aimed at investigating the effect of
ipped instruction on Iranian EFL learners’ quality of argumentative essays. The participants
were 55 students, who were assigned to two groups: the ipped classroom (FC) and the
traditional classroom (TC). Each group received 3 sessions of treatment. First, whether there
was any signicant difference between the FC and TC in the overall quality of the essays was
investigated. The FC group signicantly outperformed the TC one. Then, whether the difference
between the groups varied over time was explored, and it was revealed that the FC was still
signicantly superior over the TC. Next, whether there would be any signicant change in the FC
in the long run was examined, and no signicant change was seen. The promising results found
in FC group can be attributed to not only the ipped instruction but also the process of actively
engaging the learners in their learning in addition to incorporating different techniques, such as
the video screencasting, collaborative writing, as well as in-class teacher-learner interaction and
negotiation because it is argued that the crucial point in ipped instruction is how teachers best
use in-class-time with students.
INTRODUCTION
Writing skill is a complex process because it requires the
skillful coordination of both cognitive and linguistic pro-
cesses and resources (Hayes, 1996; Kellogg, 1996); focusing
on higher level skills of planning and organizing (i.e. gener-
ating and organizing ideas) as well as lower level skills of
spelling, punctuation and word choice can be a daunting task
(Richards & Renandya, 2002). As a result, teaching second
language (henceforth, L2) writing skill is not only very im-
portant but also challenging for L2 writing instructors (Far-
ah, 2014).
In addition, individual differences (IDs) are known as
the “consistent predictors of L2 learning success” (Dörnyei,
2005, p. 6) and it is expected that learners with different cog-
nitive abilities “execute and orchestrate these processes with
varying degrees of efciency and differ in how they learn to
write in another language” (Kormos, 2012, p. 390). Differ-
ences in learners’ learning styles can also either support or
inhibit the learners’ intentional cognition and active engage-
ment (Katayama, 2007).
Considering the mentioned issues, the researchers in the
current study who were seeking for an effective technique
for L2 writing instruction noticed the ‘ipped learning ap-
proach’ and decided to investigate its effectiveness with
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some Iranian EFL learners. Based on the literature, to re-
solve the students’ writing problems posed by their different
needs as the result of their different learning styles, ipped
classrooms can be run to facilitate students with different
phases of learning and to encourage more student engage-
ment. Flipped teaching, as “a relatively new instructional
method” (Ekmekci, 2017, p. 152), is a pedagogical approach
in which the typical activities of classroom lectures followed
by homework in common teaching practice are reversed in
order, and often integrated or supplemented with instruction-
al videos (Ekmekci, 2017; Tucker, 2012).
It is stated that the ipped classroom “serves the prin-
ciples of personalized-differentiated learning, student-cen-
tered instruction, and constructivism.” (Basal, 2015, p. 29) It
is personalized due to the fact that every individual student
views/reviews material and learns at their own pace and ac-
cording to their own needs (Basal, 2015; Egbert, Herman,
& Lee, 2015; Muldrow, 2013). It is student-centered be-
cause the students are highly active and mainly engaged in
class activities (Baepler, Walker, & Driessen, 2014; Basal,
2015; Bishop & Verleger, 2013; Davies, Dean, & Ball, 2013;
O’Flaherty & Phillips, 2015), whereas the teacher’s role
changes to a guide, facilitator and organizer (Basal, 2015;
Bishop & Verleger, 2013). The students take responsibility
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ARTICLE INFO
Article history
Received: November 15, 2017
Accepted: December 26, 2017
Published: February 28, 2018
Volume: 9 Issue: 1
Advance access: January 2018
Conicts of interest: None
Funding: None
Key words:
Flipped Writing Classroom,
EFL Learner Active Engagement,
Teacher-learner Interaction/
Negotiation,
Argumentative Essay
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for their own learning (Basal, 2015). Teachers can struc-
ture class time to optimize their attention to each individ-
ual student (Ekmekci, 2017; Muldrow, 2013) and carefully
notice the students’ learning and understanding of informa-
tion (Johnson & Renner, 2012; Roehl, Reddy, & Shannon,
2013). Additionally, the class time can incorporate a variety
of activities, group work, and interactive discussion (Bas-
al, 2015; Danker, 2015; Egbert et al., 2015; Muldrow, 2013)
that may not usually t into the class activities in traditional
classrooms due to time constraints of the curriculum (Egbert
et al., 2015; Muldrow, 2013). In light of all the mentioned
issues, in a ipped classroom, the students’ different needs
and learning styles can be addressed (Afrilyasanti, Cahyono,
& Astuti, 2016).
Theoretical Background
The students are highly active and engaged in class activities,
so the principles supporting the ipped instruction approach
are rooted in theoretical understandings of active learning
(Bonnell & Eison, 1991; Meyers & Jones, 1993). Besides,
with regard to approaches in language teaching, the ipped
instruction follows the learning theories of Communicative
Language Teaching (Ahmed, 2016), which is also corrobo-
rated by interactional theory and socio-cultural learning the-
ory (Richards & Rodgers, 2014). In ipped classrooms, the
learners cooperate and collaborate as well as interact with
the teacher in order to achieve understanding of the lesson,
which is consistent with the interactional theory.
A ipped classroom is also supported by Vygotsky’s socio-
cultural theory or social constructivism because, based on Rich-
ards and Rodgers’ (2014) description of this theory, through
ipped instruction, learning takes place through scaffolding, the
process of interaction between the people in the classroom, as
they do the activities. Learning takes place in a context in which
there is interaction among people (students and teachers), in-
struments (videos, books, etc.) and organized activities.
Moreover, the instructional videos are used in ipped
classrooms, which is in fact, an example of Computer or
Technology Assisted Language Learning (CALL/TALL),
to which the Vygotsky’s sociocultural theory can be applied
(Warschauer, 2005) due to the fact that based on Vygotsky
(1981, as cited in Warschauer, 2005), via mediation or the
incorporation of tools or meditational means, the entire ow
and structure of mental functions will alter; computer can be
an example of those meditational means (Warschauer, 2005).
Additionally, the interactive learning environment in the L2
learning, corroborates the social learning aspect of the Vy-
goskyian’s theory (Warschauer, Turbee, & Roberts, 1996).
In light of the above-mentioned points, the researchers of
the current study decided to compare the ipped classroom
(FC) with the traditional instruction in a classroom (TC),
whose details are going to be explained in the Procedure
Section; consequently, this study has addressed the follow-
ing question:
Is there any signicant difference between the FC group
and TC one in the overall quality of their argumentative es-
says? If so, does the difference between groups vary over
time? If one group proves to be superior, will there be any
signicant change in it in the long term?
REVIEW OF LITERATURE
As Ekmekci (2017) truly stated, “studies on ipped class-
room are limited, but studies on ipped language learning
classrooms are much more limited.” (p. 155). The following
are some of the previous studies relevant to the present one.
Farah (2014) compared the effect of ipped instruction-
al method and traditional one on the writing performance
of twelfth grade Emirati female students in a technical high
school by a fteen-week teaching program. She found that
the experimental group that experienced ipped instruction
signicantly outperformed the control group that received
traditional instruction.
Leis, Tohei, and Cooke (2015) compared a traditional En-
glish composition course with the other using the ipped meth-
od with 22 Japanese university students. The results showed
that those studying under the ipped method produced a sig-
nicantly higher number of words in essays. In addition, the
participants who received the ipped method resulted in sig-
nicantly greater improvements in their writing prociency.
Afrilyasanti et al., (2016) explored the effect of using
ipped classroom model on the writing ability of 62 EFL
students at an Indonesian secondary school level across their
individual differences in learning. The learning group proved
to be signicantly better than the control group.
Ahmed (2016) investigated the effect of a ipping class-
room on writing skill in the EFL context of Saudi Arabia with
60 female university students (30 in ipped classroom and 30 in
the control group). The ipped learning group was signicantly
better than the control group. Additionally, the participants who
experienced ipped learning have positive attitudes towards it.
Ekmekci (2017) compared ipped and traditional face-
to-face lecture-based writing classes on the basis of writing
performances with 23 Turkish English Language Teaching
(ELT) students in the experimental group and 20 ELT prepa-
ratory class students in the control group for fteen weeks.
The ipped classroom signicantly outperformed the tradi-
tional one after the treatment process. Besides, the majority
of the students in the ipped instruction group held positive
attitudes towards the received instruction.
It is stated that the idea of ipped classroom does not
work in every community, especially because of contextu-
al differences (Muldrow, 2013), and to the best knowledge
of the researchers of the present study, to date, there has
been no available empirical study investigating the effect of
ipped instruction on the quality of the Iranian EFL learners’
writing quality. Consequently, this issue was explored via
this experimental research.
METHOD
Participants and Groupings
The students of two branches of an EFL learning institute
in Iran, who were native speakers of Persian and studying
the 2
nd
edition of the book Summit 1, written by Saslow and
Ascher (2012), were informed that the institute would offer a
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free intensive course on argumentative essay writing. 74 stu-
dents signed up. They were given the Quick Placement Test.
The score of 69 students ranged from 38 to 43; the rest were
outliers; thus, those 69 learners were selected as the partic-
ipants and were assigned randomly to groups of ‘ipped
classroom’ (FC), and ‘traditional classroom’ (TC), but 14
learners were absent for the posttest or delayed-posttest, so
they were discarded, and totally, 55 students (41 females and
14 males), ranging from 21 to 36 years old, formed the par-
ticipants.
Design
The study was a pretest-treatment-posttest-delayed posttest
as well as a comparison-group one. There were two inde-
pendent variables called ‘ipped instruction’ and ‘traditional
instruction’ as well as a dependent variable named overall
writing quality.
Instrumentation
Four tests were used in each group: Quick Placement Test
(QPT), a pretest, a posttest, and a delayed-posttest of argu-
mentative essay writing. Moreover, to evaluate the partic-
ipants’ essays, the human scoring rubric proposed by Ya-
mamoto, Umemura, and Kawano (2018) was utilized. This
rubric is attached to the Appendix in order that more infor-
mation can be provided. Furthermore, the software Camtasia
was utilized to provide the instructional videos for the FC
group.
Moreover, As recommended by Bergmann and Sams
(2012, as cited in J. Egbert et al., 2015), the book Essay Writ-
ing for English Tests by Duigu (2002) as well as a pamphlet
supplemented the videos and were utilized in conjunction
with the videos and other resources for out-of-class prepara-
tion. The pamphlet included chapter 9 (Outlining an Essay)
of the book Academic writing: From paragraph to essay by
Zemack and Rumisek (2005), and chapter 8 (Argumentative
Essay) of the book ‘Longman Academic Writing Series: Es-
says’ by Oshima and Hogue (2014).
Data Collection Procedure
It has been mentioned in the literature that not every ipped
classroom looks exactly the same (Egbert, Herman, & Lee,
2015; Hung, 2015; Muldrow, 2013). “There are yet no set
guidelines for exactly what ipped instruction should look
like” (J. Egbert et al., 2015, p. 3), and there can be “as many
approaches to the ipped classroom as there are research-
ers implementing it” (Basal, 2015, p. 33); however, many
researchers pursue an approach that requires the learners to
watch a video or PowerPoint presentation in preparation for
follow-up activities in class; thus, the pre-recoded videos
or other types of pre-prepared materials must be combined
with in-class effective activities (Basal, 2015; Egbert et al.,
2015; Ekmekci, 2017; Muldrow, 2013) because the under-
lying idea of ipped classrooms is that instruction should
be done both in and outside the classroom via a variety of
mediums in order that the approach can “provide rich learn-
ing opportunities for students with different learning styles”
(Basal, 2015, p. 33). Given the mentioned issues, the follow-
ing procedure was designed and implemented in the present
study.
On rst session, the students in both groups wrote an es-
say of argumentative type, which was used as the pretest. It
lasted for 40 minutes. The treatment lasted for three more
sessions, during two weeks, and the immediate posttest was
implemented on Session 5. Two weeks after administering
the posttest, the participants were called on to take the de-
layed-posttest. Following Bitcheners (2008) comment, the
participants were not told when the delayed post-test would
be administered in order to eliminate the possibility of any
student studying their personal notes or reviewing the vid-
eos. The teacher-researcher did not want the students to be
prepared for the test beforehand.
Procedure in the traditional classroom
The teacher, via giving lectures, taught ‘Sections of the Ar-
gumentative Essay’, ‘Selecting and Presenting Ideas’, and
how to write the argumentative essays. The students were
required to listen carefully. Although some exercises were
done in class, because the teacher had to use most of the
class time to explain the lesson, there was limited time for
the writing practice itself. Therefore, the students had to do
the exercises of the book or pamphlet and their writing tasks
at home.
Procedure in the ipped classroom
After the students took the pretest, the teacher-researcher
explained the instructional technique which would be used
during the class. Then, they were provided with two instruc-
tional PowerPoint Files and a video on a DVD. For the rest
of the treatment sessions, the students, at their convenience,
received the pre-recorded instructional videos the teacher
had already provided for them by email or download it to
their memory cards of their smart phones, tablets, or laptops
in class.
The whole ipped classroom was a kind of workshop
in which students could ask questions about video content,
evaluate their understanding, and interact with each other
through hands-on activities. The students were required to
watch the videos at home before coming to class. They had
the possibility of reviewing the videos at their own pace and
pause to take notes or review the important points. Howev-
er, as Bergman and Sams (2012, as cited in Ekmekci, 2017)
stated, teacher-created videos that students watch are not the
vital point in ipped classrooms and the crucial point is how
teachers best use in-class-time with students. Due to the fact
that English was not the native language of the students in
the current study, the possibilities of misunderstanding oc-
curring due to insufcient English ability were high, so in
the classroom, the students were required to lecture on what
they learned from the video.
The students were also engaged in active learning by
studying in groups. Group discussions and group work were
done to clarify any confusion or misconceptions that may
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have arisen after using the videos and/or resources. These
tasks provide opportunities for collaborative learning and
problem-solving (Shimamoto, 2012; Straye, 2007) as stu-
dents share their ideas and understand the lessons that they
might otherwise be unable to achieve on their own. The
teacher was there to provide help, especially the individ-
ualized one for clarifying the misunderstanding, solving
problems and giving feedback when needed. Students had
a chance for additional practicing and support. The teach-
ers presence ensured that the students would be guided and
helped whenever they were confused.
As recommended by Bergmann and Sams, 2012, as cited
in J. Egbert et al., (2015), two textbooks complemented the
videos and were utilized in conjunction with the videos and
other resources for preparation both in and out of the class.
ANALYSES AND RESULTS
Inter-rater Reliability
To assess the inter-rater reliability of the tests in the study,
Cronbach alpha coefcient was utilized. Table 2 shows the
results.
The Normality Tests
The assumption of normality was examined through both
the graphic of histogram and the numerical way
recommended by Larson-Hall (2010); the ratio of
skewedness and kurtosis over their respective standard
errors, as well as the Kolm-ogorov-Smirnov and the
Shapiro-Wilk
tests were utilized as the numerical way of
assessing the normality (Field, 2013;
Larson-Hall, 2010). The only test that proved to be normal
was the Quick Placement Tests in both groups, so indepen-
dent samples t-test was used for it. However, the other tests
of both groups did not enjoy normal distribution as indicated
by histograms and the mentioned numerical tests; the out-
comes of the ratio of kurtosis were not within the ranges of
+/- 1.96 (Field, 2013); The found Sig. values on the Kolm-
ogorov–Smirnov and the Shapiro–Wilk tests were.000. As a
result, the relevant non-parametric tests were used to nd the
answers to the research questions.
Ensuring the Homogeneity of the Groups
First, an independent t-test was run to compare the mean
scores of the FC and TC groups on the QPT in order to prove
that both groups enjoyed the same level of general language
prociency prior to the administration of the treatments.
First, it should be noted that, the assumption of homo-
geneity of variances was not met (Levene’s F =.01, p =.01
<.05). That is why the second row of Table 4, “Equal varianc-
es not assumed” is reported. Based on the results displayed
in Tables 3 and 4, it could be concluded that on average,
there was not a signicant difference between the groups at
the outset of the study. FC group (M = 40.61); TC group
(M = 40.67). t
(53) equaled -.15, and the p-value for this t
was.87 (Sig (2-tailed) =.87 >.05); however, it represented a
very small-sized effect (Cohen’s d =.04; r =.02).
In addition, a Mann-Whitney U test was run to compare the
pretests in TC and FC groups to nd out whether the groups
were homogeneous in their overall writing performance. The
test revealed no signicant difference between them (TC
Table 1. Treatment period procedure in the FC group
Treatment Period Procedure
Week 1 Session 1 After administering the pretest, the teacher-researcher explained the instructional technique which would
be used during the class. Then, the students received a DVD, carrying two instructional PowerPoint files
and an instructional video. The PowerPoint files were about ‘Sections of the Argumentative Essay’ and
‘Selecting and Presenting Ideas’. The video taught how to outline an essay. The students were required to
watch and study the materials at home before coming to class.
Session 2 The students lectured on what they learned from the PowerPoint files and video; they explained the points,
negotiate the issues, and asked their peers or teacher their questions to clarify any misunderstanding or
vague points.
Then, they received the second video holding an instruction on how to write an argumentative essay
of opinion-led type (i.e., whether the person agrees or disagrees with an opinion). Like the previous
assignment, the students were required to watch and study the information in the video at home before
coming to class.
Session 3
For about 20 minutes, the students could ask either the teacher or the peers their questions. Then, the
teacher gave the learners a new topic of the same type and asked them to work in pairs and write an essay
collaboratively. The allotted time for this activity was 40 minutes. Because the purpose of this activity
was not testing the students’ writing skill, rather it was done in order for them to practice, they could refer
to their writing or grammar books for more information or resolving their problems. They could even
ask their peers in other groups their questions. Then the final 30 minute of the class was spent providing
teacher oral feedback on the written essays.
Finally, the students received the third video holding an instruction on how to write an argument-led essay
type (i.e., providing the person with two arguments of a topic and requiring him/her to discuss both views
and give their own opinion). The students’ responsibility was as the previous sessions.
Week 2 Session 4 The same procedure as Session 3 of Week 1 was applied.
Session 5 The posttest was implemented.
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Group: (Md = 4.50)), (FC Group (Md = 4.50), U = 362.00, z
= -.292, p =.77 >.05; however, it represented a very small effect
(r = -.02) based on Cohen (1988, as cited in Pallant, 2013).
Findings of the Research Questions
First, the Mann-Whitney U Test, which was run to compare
the posttests in TC and FC groups, revealed a signicantly
difference in the overall quality of the groups’ argumentative
essays (TC Group: (Md = 5.50)), (FC Group (Md = 6.75),
U = 60.50, z = -5.60, p =.000, r = -.75. The median scores
showed that the FC outperformed the TC and the found ef-
fect size was large, based on Cohen (1988, as cited in Pal-
lant, 2013).
Then, another Mann-Whitney U Test was run to compare
the delayed-posttests in TC and FC groups to nd out wheth-
er or not the found difference between groups vary over time.
The test indicated that the two groups were still signicantly
different and the FC was still superior in their overall quality
of their argumentative essays (TC Group: (Md = 5.50)), (FC
Group (Md = 6.50), U = 71.50, z = -5.46, p =.000, r = -.73.
The median scores also showed no change. A large effect
size was also found.
Finally, because the FC was found to be superior in their
overall quality of their essays, a Wilcoxon Signed Rank Test
was run to compare the posttest and delayed-posttest of this
group to reveal whether or not there would be any signicant
change in it in the long term. The test showed no signicant
difference: z = -1.63, p =.10; the median scores indicated no
change (Md = 6.00); however, the calculation of the effect
size represented below medium effect size (r = -.22).
DISCUSSION AND CONCLUSION
The ndings of this study prove that ipped writing class
improves students’ writing quality more than the tradition-
al lecture-based writing instruction, so employing ipped
learning in writing classes can be considered as an effective
way of instruction for improving writing skills of EFL stu-
dents. The ndings corroborate the previous relevant studies
considering the effect of ipped writing classrooms on the
EFL learners’ writing prociency (Afrilyasanti, Cahyono, &
Astuti, 2016; Ahmed, 2016; Ekmekci, 2017; Farah, 2014;
Leis, Tohei, & Cooke, 2015). The results can be attributed to
the following points:
The ndings could be interpreted as the benets of in-
corporating different techniques in teaching, which is in fact
a form of blended learning and a set of class tasks that are
differentiated depending on students’ personal and various
abilities (Ahmed, 2016). The ndings supports the belief that
if the learners’ differences, such as their different needs and
learning styles, are satised by the utilized educational tech-
nique in the classroom, such as the video screencasting in the
present study, benecial effects will be produced (Afrilyasa-
nti, Cahyono, & Astuti, 2016; Cohen, 2012; Dörnyei, 2005;
Mayer & Moreno, 2003).
Table 2. Inter-rater reliability
Groups Tests Indices
TC Pretest 0.78
Posttest 0.83
Delayed-Posttest 0.88
FC Pretest 0.83
Posttest 0.89
Delayed-Posttest 0.92
Table 3. Descriptive statistics QPT
Group N Mean SD SEM
FC 28 40.61 1.39 0.264
TC 27 40.67 1.38 0.267
Table 4. Independent t-test QPT
Levene’s test
for equality
of variances
t-test for equality of means
F Sig. t df Sig. (2-tailed) Mean
difference
Standard error
difference
95% confidence interval
Lower Upper
Equal variances
assumed
0.01 0.91 ‒0.15 53 0.87 ‒0.06 0.37 ‒0.81 0.69
Equal variances
not assumed
‒0.15 52.95 0.87 ‒0.06 0.37 ‒0.81 0.69
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Moreover, what has been found corroborates the effec-
tiveness of active learning and actively engaging the learners
in their learning, so that they would not be the passive re-
cipients of knowledge, rather they undertake responsibility
for their learning (Baepler, Walker, & Driessen, 2014; Basal,
2015; Davies, Dean, & Ball, 2013; Muldrow, 2013; O’Fla-
herty & Phillips, 2015).
Additionally, as the students had this opportunity to write
collaboratively, this activity could have positive effects on
the participants ability to write their essays, and this can be
considered as consistent with the ndings of previous studies
(See, e.g. Ajideh, Leitner, & Yazdi-Amirkhiz, 2016; Elola &
Oskoz, 2010; Shehadeh, 2011; Storch, 2005; Storch & Wig-
glesworth, 2007) and the sociocultural perspective in L2 in-
struction, which requires the learners to seek cooperation and
assistance from different people and resources (Cumming,
2001). It has been stated that collaboration makes learners
think about their language-related problems when they are
engaged in their writing tasks (Swain, 2000); therefore, it is
highly recommended that learners “be encouraged to partic-
ipate in activities which foster interaction and co-construc-
tion of knowledge” (Storch, 2005, p. 154).
Furthermore, the ndings prove the effectiveness of
teacher-learner interaction and face-to-face negotiation
to reduce the misunderstandings, as is in line with Long’s
(1996) Interaction Hypothesis and Vygotsky’s emphasis on
the importance of meaningful social interactions between
novice learners and more experienced others (Nyikos &
Hashimoto, 1997; O’Donoghue & Clarke, 2010); Vygosky
believed that such interaction will support learning because
cognitive functions originate in social interaction and that
learning “is the process by which learners are integrated into
a knowledge community” (Woo & Reeves, 2007, p. 18);
such interaction is highly recommended by several scholars
(e.g. Han & Hyland, 2015; Hyland, 2009; Lee, 2013; Nas-
saji, 2011; Nicol, 2010; Pica, 1994; Williams & Severino,
2004) because it is assumed to be essential for the learners
cognitive development to occur and progress, “which extend
his or her knowledge of the task at hand from a lower level
of understanding to a higher order of thinking through, with
the assistance of more experienced social partners” (Lin &
Yang, 2011, p. 4). Therefore, through the process of negotia-
tion, the participants in the FC were able to understand their
own strengths and weaknesses; they could also learn what to
“do to close the gaps (i.e. improve the weaknesses) in their
writing” (Lee, 2014, p. 204).
In conclusion, in this study, through the ipped instruc-
tion, both cognitive apprenticeship and scaffolding occurred;
like what Nyikos and Hashimoto (1997) explained, the stu-
dents were engaged in reective thinking. The responsibility
for learning was mainly on the learner, but the teacher, also
as the more knowledgeable person, had the responsibility of
offering the learner support to facilitate the process of learn-
ing because as Benko (2012) stated, scaffolding is essential
for tasks which are beyond students’ independent language
abilities. Moreover, the different functions of interactional
modications, such as providing a condition for the learners
to receive comprehensible input, produce modied output,
and notice the gaps in their knowledge could help them re-
structure their interlanguages (Mackey, 2012).
DELIMITATION OF THIS STUDY AND
SUGGESTIONS FOR FURTHER RESEARCH
As the concluding remarks, two points need to be mentioned:
First, even though the ipped instruction was proved ef-
fective in this study, we cannot generalize from this sample
because the participating students in the current study were
at the upper-intermediate level of English prociency, and
the ipped instruction may yield different results if it is con-
ducted in classes with lower-prociency-level students.
Next, a qualitative study is essential to investigate the
students’ attitudes and expectations towards the purpose
and value of the FC with the aims of rst, exploring their
attitudinal engagement, which was recommended by (Ellis,
2010), and second, nding out some information about their
individual differences via analyzing their statements in order
to understand how they can be helped to do the writing task
better (Hyland, 2009).
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The Rubric for Scoring the essays
Evaluation
viewpoint
Achievement level and scoring
D (0–1) C (2–3) B (4–5) A (6–7) A+ (8–9)
[Content]
Understanding
of the assigned
tasks and validity
of contents
Misunderstanding
the assigned task,
or the contents are
not related to the
topic at all
Understanding
the assigned
task, but
includes some
errors
Understanding
the assigned
task, but the
contents are
insufficient
Understanding
the assigned
task, but has
some points to
improve
Appropriate contents
with relevant terms.
No need for
improvement
[Structure]
Logical
development
No structure or
theoretical
development
There is a
contradiction in
the development
of the theory
Although
developing
theory in order,
there are some
points to be
improved
Although
developing
theory in order,
the theory is not
compelling
The theory is
compelling and
conveying the
writers
understanding
[Evidence]
Validity of
sources and
evidence
It does not show
evidence
Demonstrates
an attempt to
support ideas
The sources to
be referenced
are inappropriate
or unreliable
Uses relevant
and reliable
sources, but the
way of
reference is not
suitable
Demonstrates
the skillful use
of high-quality
and relevant
sources
[Style]
Proper usage
of grammar
and elaboration
of sentences
There are some
Grammatical errors.
Many corrections
required
Not following
the rules. Some
corrections
required
Almost follow
the rules. A few
corrections
required
Although
error-free, some
improvement
will be better
Virtually error-free and
well elaborated.
No point to
improve
[Skill]
Readability
and writing
skill
The sentences are
hard to read.
Writing skills are
missing
There are
several points
to be improved,
such as the
length of
sentences
Although
sentences can be
read generally,
some
improvement
will be better
Easy to read.
Rich in
vocabulary
Easy to read.
Skillfully
Communicates
meaning to readers.
Rich in
vocabulary