Financial hardship in your family
Coming from a single-parent or foster parent home
Older siblings already at college
Parent(s) is disabled, out of work or incarcerated
Coming from a low-income family, neighborhood or Title I school
Receiving government assistance (housing, food stamps, etc.)
Being a ward of the state with no support system
All of these reasons – and more – are why you might need the money. Tell the
committee that in your scholarship personal statement.
Telling them these things should not be seen as “feeling sorry for yourself” or
begging for help. These are all legitimate reasons you could potentially need
help paying for college. As long as you’re being honest, these are definitely
things that should be included in your personal statement.
Telling the committee why you deserve the scholarship is a little different.
While all those reasons are why you need the money, they don’t explain why
you deserve it. This is the part of the scholarship personal statement where you
sell the committee on YOU.
Tell them about all the great things you’ve done. If you were an honor roll
student, a member of the BETA Club or National Honor Society, or a National
Merit Scholar, put that in your statement.
Other reasons you could cite as to why you deserve a scholarship include:
Exceptional athletic ability or talent
Many hours of documented community service
Having served your country honorably in the military
Impressive personal stories of overcoming adversity
Exceptional ACT/SAT scores
A schedule that shows an impressive balance of grades, sports, community service,
etc.